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Poetic Challenge-II  


9/5/2010 7:33 am
Just for inspiration, now!

Ari says its my turn so i oblige:

Big hips, Space, petty places, held back, enslaved, mighty, magic, a spell, spin , like a top, want , move, free, man.

Good luck ooooooo
Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/5/2010 9:22 am

Thanks, Nanjinita. I really love the idea of getting lots of people involved...in both choosing the words...and writing. I appreciate you.

Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/5/2010 2:38 pm

A rare rear view...thot this would be walk over for the dudes but again maybe it has rendered them speechless...LOL...oh my, lets see who is the brave one to turn his drool/lust into a poem, how difficult can that be?i vonderrrrrrr.........Geez!

Ari n ndpendent, you are fun for real...he he he!

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/5/2010 2:39 pm

    Quoting Ari_fairy:
    Thanks, Nanjinita. I really love the idea of getting lots of people involved...in both choosing the words...and writing. I appreciate you.
Anytime, anything....just for ya! Have a nice one!

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/5/2010 2:41 pm

, oh well...yap, i trust its gonna be a juicy one, cannot just wait

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/5/2010 2:45 pm

You ahould see the poem i have written for this....its just like so ticklish!hahaha...ya know like shaking that bootie..etc!Hot hot ...ya know like what would a dude think if this just landed on his laps...you get?

nemesis58
3362 posts 

9/6/2010 4:16 am

- you might just win, dear Nanjjinita and on merit.

Have a great Monday and the week.


LIFE MAY NOT BE A BED OF ROSES, BUT NO ONE STOPPED US FROM PUTTING ROSES IN OUR BED.

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 6:18 am

    Quoting nemesis58:
    - you might just win, dear Nanjjinita and on merit.

    Have a great Monday and the week.

Ahhh now, write about how you got blown off !He he he..

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 6:25 am

Hip Hip All The Way

These Big hips of mine
Swaying both ways
With a rounded grind
Spaced out to move around
Far and wide with no fear
Little petty places
Won’t just do
Coz they just won't fit
Won’t be held back
For they got to flow
But no panty line to show
Never to be enslaved
Neither to be shaved or shoved
Where they want they go
Off they bounce in a blow
Freely moving as they wish
These mighty hips
Ooooo these Magical hips
I have known them
To put a spell on a man
And Spin him like a top
Mighty Egos rolled
And twisted into a drool
Oh these hips of mine

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/6/2010 10:38 am

    Quoting nanjinita:
    Hip Hip All The Way

    These Big hips of mine
    Swaying both ways
    With a rounded grind
    Spaced out to move around
    Far and wide with no fear
    Little petty places
    Won’t just do
    Coz they just won't fit
    Won’t be held back
    For they got to flow
    But no panty line to show
    Never to be enslaved
    Neither to be shaved or shoved
    Where they want they go
    Off they bounce in a blow
    Freely moving as they wish
    These mighty hips
    Ooooo these Magical hips
    I have known them
    To put a spell on a man
    And Spin him like a top
    Mighty Egos rolled
    And twisted into a drool
    Oh these hips of mine


Lol....I recommend the yellow tongie....no panty line....

Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

viola1107
3624 posts 

9/6/2010 10:49 am

this could get really challenging since i ain't got no big hips, dear... perhaps, b could have the hips haha... ok, ok i will take the challenge and come back to post what i've come up with tomorrow, ok. have fun grooving and moving that big hips of yours! nicely-turned out poem, btw

"...paint paradise, then in you go..."

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/6/2010 11:02 am

Released

You spoke me free.
Your magic woven
As a silent spell
Fractured Dante’s Hell.

Restrained anger.
Hearts like broken tops
Within the whirlwind.
Even envy sinned

Held back, denied,
Harsh words oft spoken
In petty places.
Those empty spaces.

Hope was enslaved
Within light spinning.
His unmoving lips;
Whirling her big hips.

You made me want.
A mighty hunger
Dreams deeply of more.
Sweet man, je t’adore.

Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

Poetdancerin
8920 posts 

9/6/2010 12:12 pm

I'm just sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo jealous

You with your big hips and all

There is NO WAY!! I can compete

It's better to smile and have dimples
than to frown and have wrinkles

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/6/2010 2:09 pm

    Quoting Poetdancerin:
    I'm just sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo jealous

    You with your big hips and all

    There is NO WAY!! I can compete
She did a great job, didn't she. But...do it your own way. With a story...or limericks...or however you see fit. It's all meant to be for fun, not for competing. It's fun to see how we each twist the words differently to shape our vision.

Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

debutanteBaltimr
17977 posts 

9/6/2010 2:34 pm

I can't wait for the photo challenge! Here is the first topic: Woman's from the BACK!

HuzatKrazyLONG -edMayne???

TheGG
510 posts 

9/6/2010 5:19 pm

I know now those big hips won’t do it for me. Maybe for concentration. But definitely not for inspiration.

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/6/2010 6:22 pm

    Quoting TheGG:
    I know now those big hips won’t do it for me. Maybe for concentration. But definitely not for inspiration.
Try a different version...alter the wording slightly. I thought I would not be able to use them either...but it flowed intriguingly when I found the place to use them.

You do not have to use all words...it is a challenge to do so.

Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

Mistytraveller
16286 posts 

9/6/2010 9:38 pm

Gad...I just finished Ari's challenge and now there's this one toooooo!!! Okay...I'm a slow writer... will try this as well....

Just wondering if you've read/heard Lucille Clifton's poems on big hips...fabulous.....

Wishing you happiness

Misty

Poetdancerin
8920 posts 

9/6/2010 9:49 pm

    Quoting nanjinita:
    Hip Hip All The Way

    These Big hips of mine
    Swaying both ways
    With a rounded grind
    Spaced out to move around
    Far and wide with no fear
    Little petty places
    Won’t just do
    Coz they just won't fit
    Won’t be held back
    For they got to flow
    But no panty line to show
    Never to be enslaved
    Neither to be shaved or shoved
    Where they want they go
    Off they bounce in a blow
    Freely moving as they wish
    These mighty hips
    Ooooo these Magical hips
    I have known them
    To put a spell on a man
    And Spin him like a top
    Mighty Egos rolled
    And twisted into a drool
    Oh these hips of mine




GREAT!!! Well done Nanjinita

sorry ... was too tired last night to read this at 3am


It's better to smile and have dimples
than to frown and have wrinkles

Poetdancerin
8920 posts 

9/6/2010 9:51 pm

    Quoting Ari_fairy:
    She did a great job, didn't she. But...do it your own way. With a story...or limericks...or however you see fit. It's all meant to be for fun, not for competing. It's fun to see how we each twist the words differently to shape our vision.
Will have to find my thinking cap first Ari

It's better to smile and have dimples
than to frown and have wrinkles

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 10:28 pm

, i don't have huge hips either actually just average tho nicely rounded i am told(lol, i recall my hubby would always say to me your butt n legs earned you the 'ring'....he he he, geez, da ego of dat man) anywayz all thnx goes to my mama n grandma.This particular topic of big hips was inspired by some nigerian movie i had watched in the day, n there was this main character a lady who really had a huge 'wobbly backyard' yuck, lol...that she surely flaunted n used to get her way around dudes.And it was hillarious how she played the part...delightfully funny she was....hahaha,omg..she did make my day for real couldn't stop giggling even after. So when Ari honored me n i really didn't know how to go about it n let her down...my imagination strolled to the movie scene.

The rest of me AVERAGE..but i still feel i am beautifully n wonderfully made like everyone is.Every one in here has got one unique feature that makes them outstanding,amazes me...

Do your thing your way as Ari says...a sentence, not all the words..anything ok the deal, make it either passionate or hillarious.

Cheers!!

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 10:31 pm

    Quoting Ari_fairy:
    Released

    You spoke me free.
    Your magic woven
    As a silent spell
    Fractured Dante’s Hell.

    Restrained anger.
    Hearts like broken tops
    Within the whirlwind.
    Even envy sinned

    Held back, denied,
    Harsh words oft spoken
    In petty places.
    Those empty spaces.

    Hope was enslaved
    Within light spinning.
    His unmoving lips;
    Whirling her big hips.

    You made me want.
    A mighty hunger
    Dreams deeply of more.
    Sweet man, je t’adore.
Outstanding darling, i love it, oh my the restrained passion finally released powerfully, lovely job for real!You did my challenge proud

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 10:43 pm

    Quoting viola1107:
    this could get really challenging since i ain't got no big hips, dear... perhaps, b could have the hips haha... ok, ok i will take the challenge and come back to post what i've come up with tomorrow, ok. have fun grooving and moving that big hips of yours! nicely-turned out poem, btw
Anytime dear, take your time my dear...lol, oops n don't u worry nothing near those hips.
Think mathematically too, what do you ... 2 hips melt into a huge pair of hips to paste 4 lips making 2 hearts to slip off 2 tops n drop then free into infinity for days never to be enslaved but rolled , spinned in a multiple spell of magic and let your imagination spin....lol.You go gal...

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 10:47 pm

    Quoting Poetdancerin:
    I'm just sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo jealous

    You with your big hips and all

    There is NO WAY!! I can compete
, don't be...am not that blessed....for real big hips a load of work, could send one into a spin..enslaved in a bed, in a plane can't fit in,no free movement...oh boy, no t/y!

Do your thing....lol....

Cheers n hugs

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 10:48 pm

    Quoting debutanteBaltimr:
    I can't wait for the photo challenge! Here is the first topic: Woman's from the BACK!
"Giggles"...i should have found one with a long lock of dark hair, wot was i thinking now...

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/6/2010 10:50 pm

    Quoting TheGG:
    I know now those big hips won’t do it for me. Maybe for concentration. But definitely not for inspiration.
GG, really? why not...must say you one in a million.Btw, you look so much younger in this pix..how is that?....hot tho!

TheGG
510 posts 

9/7/2010 3:06 pm

    Quoting TheGG:
    I know now those big hips won’t do it for me. Maybe for concentration. But definitely not for inspiration.
Actually, I wasn’t referring to the words in the challenge, but to the photo posted here, which, according to the caption below it, was “for inspiration”. LOL.

viola1107
3624 posts 

9/8/2010 10:55 am

as promised, here you go

you held back
needing space
just move over
to my place.

i'll share the bed
its frilly laces
have at the other
petty places.

i say, man
who wants to be free
if you can be
enslaved by me.

let's make magic
i'll cast a spell
spin like a top
which i do well.

oh, i ain't got
the mighty, big hips
but mine's been custom-sized
to fit your ship.

"...paint paradise, then in you go..."

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/8/2010 1:16 pm

    Quoting TheGG:
    Actually, I wasn’t referring to the words in the challenge, but to the photo posted here, which, according to the caption below it, was “for inspiration”. LOL.
Distraction, tongue tied, wordless..u mean?Oh poor boy

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/8/2010 1:25 pm

    Quoting viola1107:
    as promised, here you go

    you held back
    needing space
    just move over
    to my place.

    i'll share the bed
    its frilly laces
    have at the other
    petty places.

    i say, man
    who wants to be free
    if you can be
    enslaved by me.

    let's make magic
    i'll cast a spell
    spin like a top
    which i do well.

    oh, i ain't got
    the mighty, big hips
    but mine's been custom-sized
    to fit your ship.
Oh my my Viola, Viola gal....this is amazing.You pulled this one off really well, i mean it is captivating.
, i adore it especially love the flow....the seduction, lovely!!!Well done..you are clever one, you got it gal...

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/8/2010 1:35 pm

    Quoting Poetdancerin:


    GREAT!!! Well done Nanjinita

    sorry ... was too tired last night to read this at 3am

, Merci....kind of you!Hope to read something from you too dear...

Hugz

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/8/2010 3:48 pm

    Quoting viola1107:
    as promised, here you go

    you held back
    needing space
    just move over
    to my place.

    i'll share the bed
    its frilly laces
    have at the other
    petty places.

    i say, man
    who wants to be free
    if you can be
    enslaved by me.

    let's make magic
    i'll cast a spell
    spin like a top
    which i do well.

    oh, i ain't got
    the mighty, big hips
    but mine's been custom-sized
    to fit your ship.
I like this. It ripples along like water pulsing against the river banks....

Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

bigman_R4u
718 posts 

9/8/2010 5:09 pm

    Quoting viola1107:
    as promised, here you go

    you held back
    needing space
    just move over
    to my place.

    i'll share the bed
    its frilly laces
    have at the other
    petty places.

    i say, man
    who wants to be free
    if you can be
    enslaved by me.

    let's make magic
    i'll cast a spell
    spin like a top
    which i do well.

    oh, i ain't got
    the mighty, big hips
    but mine's been custom-sized
    to fit your ship.
Like the third stanza, Rose. I am poetically challenged, Ms. Nanjinita. Sorry.

_DennistheMenace
8 posts 

9/8/2010 5:38 pm

    Quoting viola1107:
    as promised, here you go

    you held back
    needing space
    just move over
    to my place.

    i'll share the bed
    its frilly laces
    have at the other
    petty places.

    i say, man
    who wants to be free
    if you can be
    enslaved by me.

    let's make magic
    i'll cast a spell
    spin like a top
    which i do well.

    oh, i ain't got
    the mighty, big hips
    but mine's been custom-sized
    to fit your ship.
Who wants to be free indeed? Good job!

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/9/2010 3:16 am

    Quoting driverdan:
    hi "S" here's what i thought of wishing you a beautiful week filled with peace love happiness

    "Beguiled Emotion"

    Her big hips
    Enslave a man
    Just in her
    Moves

    From a space
    A pretty place
    A mighty spell
    Spins

    Like a top
    Am i free
    Or held back

    Beguiled in
    Her magic

    Wanting more
    Then she will give

    Is it
    her or me

    That lost
    Pleasure

    Yet
    Unseen


    list of words in poetic challenge.
    Big hips, Space, petty places, held back, enslaved, mighty, magic, a spell, spin , like a top, want , move, free, man.
My my Dear Danny, you have done this challenge proud.What a beautifully written piece..arousing..passionate...i don't know.It is amazing how much poetic talent prowls in blogsville.

Outstanding darling....

Hugs---

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/9/2010 8:58 am

Yep,she is really something else, isn't she?If wishes were horses now...Yep,she is really something else, isn't she?If wishes were horses now...
And Btw dear hunk that is the idea it is meant for the poetic challenged...give it try now?Something macho....like lets try it 2gether now, hmmmm..

And dear hunk that is the idea it is meant for the poetic challenged...give it try now?Something macho....like lets try it 2gether now, hmmmm..

Big man are you
A Mighty spell I spin your way
Big magical hands to move
And enslave your curvy hips
Moving freely we move
Leaving no space
Just a man wanting
To take you places
Nothing petty for a pretty one
Unafraid to move forward
Neither ready to be held back..

etc.....carry on now biggy!lol

See, its all about playing around with the words now...to seduce n to be deduced

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/9/2010 9:04 am

Indeed....

viola1107
3624 posts 

9/22/2010 11:06 am

    Quoting nanjinita:
    Oh my my Viola, Viola gal....this is amazing.You pulled this one off really well, i mean it is captivating.
    , i adore it especially love the flow....the seduction, lovely!!!Well done..you are clever one, you got it gal...
much overwhelmed, girl. i was truly inspired by the words.

"...paint paradise, then in you go..."

viola1107
3624 posts 

9/22/2010 11:07 am

    Quoting driverdan:
    hi "S" here's what i thought of wishing you a beautiful week filled with peace love happiness

    "Beguiled Emotion"

    Her big hips
    Enslave a man
    Just in her
    Moves

    From a space
    A pretty place
    A mighty spell
    Spins

    Like a top
    Am i free
    Or held back

    Beguiled in
    Her magic

    Wanting more
    Then she will give

    Is it
    her or me

    That lost
    Pleasure

    Yet
    Unseen


    list of words in poetic challenge.
    Big hips, Space, petty places, held back, enslaved, mighty, magic, a spell, spin , like a top, want , move, free, man.
yeah, great job, dan

"...paint paradise, then in you go..."

viola1107
3624 posts 

9/22/2010 11:08 am

ari/big, thanks! i truly appreciate the appreciation

"...paint paradise, then in you go..."

bigman_R4u
718 posts 

10/3/2010 9:09 am

    Quoting viola1107:
    ari/big, thanks! i truly appreciate the appreciation
You're welcome!

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